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I love the way it burns slowly
As you breathe in from the tip

I love the way it feels on your lips
As you squeeze just to breathe

I love the way it makes me feel
The tingle and then calm

I love the way it tastes
When I grasp it with my lips.

But I hate the way its made people
So addictive and so nice

I hate the way it’s made me feel
The after taste of temptation

What tasted so good
Now taste like shit

What felt so good
Now feels like shit

The taste, the feel
The smell of

A cigarette.
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wagiina Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
nice poem. : ) thank you for sharing
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everythought Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
thank you :)
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Estuari Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
All harmful addictions are so difficult to get rid of. The harmful addiction I'm currently dealing with is an unrequited crush which takes up so much time that could once be spent doing something useful.

I'm glad you chose to share this poem. It's lovely.
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everythought Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
I understand how you feel. I wouldn't say what I'm going through now is an addiction, if you call love an addiction, but i hope what you're going through ends well :)

Thank you so much! i'm glad you like it :)
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Estuari Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
Thanks for wishing me well :D

Your welcome.
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everythought Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
:)
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